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Update Time. The Good, The Bad, The Nerd.

Journal Entry: Fri Oct 2, 2009, 12:02 AM

The Good.
Ok a few Good First.
1) Yesterday, October 1, 2009. was mine and my girlfriend's one month.
2) Marie Masumi, my beloved daughter, now knows how to say "Mama"


The Bad.
Ok now for the Bad... we'll start it off easy.
1) Still no Car
2) Still Miles from marie.
3) Girlfriend's Grandfather has Cancer, He's 96
4) Girlfriend's Grandmother, other side of the family, is in the Hospital.


The Nerd.
I am addicted to Dungeons and Dragons Online. free to play. I play on the server Cannith.

This Journal's Css was created by
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  • Mood: Longing
  • Listening to: Nothing
  • Reading: N0-R3AL-PR0BL3M's Poems
  • Watching: LUCKY STAR (KAWAII!!!!)
  • Playing: City of Heroes
  • Eating: Balsamic Vinegar ((if you didn't get it...))
  • Drinking: watch Lucky Star ep 5

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:iconim-not-good-at-names:
Thank you for participating to help finish: [link] , started by myself and a collaboration of various artists, I never thought this particular poem would get this far.

Once again, thank you for helping to write it and if you agree (along with other writers that helped to complete this piece of literature) I think that this work may officially be finished.

Stop by and tell us what you think! Is it done? Or do you think there is more to be added?

--
Hey now now now Hey now Hey Baby
Baby's gettin older, my baby's gettin older
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~IIIXII,~FrayedHeartString,~HudsonRyde,~orange-and-fluffly,~the-burning-rose,~Crooked-Frame1408 and ~colleen721
:iconzarathustras-crown:
yikes. rereading it there's some pretty nasty mistakes :P my bad

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
:icondari-ra:
on the critque or my poem...
Because poetry has no mistakes as long as it is an expression of one's inner thoughts.
(well except spelling.)

--
She Smiles for me and i Enjoy every Second of it...
:iconzarathustras-crown:
I meant I'd made mistakes in reviewing it (in my spelling) :P my apologies

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
:icondari-ra:
oh alright...I freaked there...
i'm not used to being critiqued...
you're the only person to critique anything of mine

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She Smiles for me and i Enjoy every Second of it...

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